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“___________!” Glancing up you saw Edward, your only friend. “Hey…” you mumbled as you dug deeper into your jacket. Sadly you were trying to hide the scars your mother had made. “Come on, I want to show you something!” he said happily taking your hand and dragging you to his house. “Oh hello ___________” Said Ed’s mom as you walked through the door. “Hello Mrs. Elric” You greeted politely. Then Ed took your hand, once more and brought you to the basement, where you saw Alphonse. “Hi Alphonse” you said in a whisper. He greeted you then Ed told you to stand by the wall, so you did. He and Al bent down by some circle thing; they called it a transmutation circle, in the center of the room. Moments later it started to glow then a doll lay in the center. Ed grabbed it and walked over to you “Here!” he said with a smile. Unsure what to do, you poked it. It seemed safe at least. Then you decided to grab it. It was… soft like Ed’s hand. Overcome with happiness you hugged Ed in the tightest hug you could manage. And then the tears came.

That was years ago. Now you had to many scars to count and no friends. Ed had moved on after his mother’s death, and last you heard he was a state alchemist under the name ‘Fullmetal.’ “___________ get out here! You have a… visitor.” You began rushing out the door so your mother wouldn't beat you again. But right now something made you jump for joy, what could it be? When you got down the stairs you slowed your walk. Your mother was sitting on the couch glaring at you. This you tried to ignore. You turned to the newcomer “Hello” You whispered, and then he turned around. It was Edward Elric. “Well look who it is!” he said walking up to you. Without thinking you grabbed onto Ed’s small frame and hugged him tightly, tears fell out of your eyes and onto his back. “___________, are you ok?” He asked worriedly. You nodded then let go of him. “M-Mother? May I-I please, um, leave for a w-while?” You knew asking was the wrong thing to do, anything you asked for would end up in an angry, screaming mother. But strangely she only gave you a glare then agreed. Ed grabbed your arm and took you outside. “So.. you happy to see me?” He asked with a cheeky grin on his face. You nodded but kept silent, the fear of you mother kept you that way. “Why are you so quite ___________?”
“I’m fine Ed…”
“I saw the way your mom looked at you. You know, you can tell me anything. I’m not going to leave you.” Hearing those truthful, caring words made you start crying again. This time you spit out all the abuse your mother had done all these years. How your mother would beat you anytime you saw him, how she would smack you for talking to loud even though you were talking at normal volume. When you finally got done saying what you needed to, Ed grabbed you and pulled you into a hug. “Idiot… Why didn't you just tell me?” Ed asked, even though he knew the answer already. You just buried your face into his shoulder and held onto his metal arm. “It’s ok, ___________...”
“B-But Ed! She never stopped! She s-said I was meaningless and s-shouldn't have been here!” Ed pulled you away to look in your eyes. “___________, I’m here now. You don’t ever have to worry. I’ll find somewhere else for you to live and I’ll arrest your mother for doing such hurtful things to you.” His face showed pure protectiveness for you, and his eyes showed bright love for only you. “Edward… I…I think I love you!” You saying those little words made Ed’s face go a deep red, of course yours was the same. “Me too…” He managed to get out the words that showed he felt the same way to you. Then before you could say anything else Ed pulled you in to a kiss. When you felt Ed’s soft lips pressed against yours you jumped a little but soon melted into the kiss. When you both parted for air Ed took you back to your home. Instead of opening the door, like any normal person would, Ed kicked it down. That’s Ed for you. “I hate to do this, but it seems like you've been a child abuser, I guess I have no other choice then to arrest you.” The look on your mother’s face was priceless, pure confusion. Ed marched right up to her then pulled her along to the nearest station. It’s a good thing you have someone like Ed you will break into your own house then arrest your mother…
Edward is awesome~ I hope you guys enjoy!

I do not own: Fullmetal Alchemist, The cover photo, or you.
I do own: The story.
Ed owns: You

Guys, this story was inspired by my friend whos dad was horrible to her. Don't sit and take it all in, tell someone, don't be quite about it please. this is really meant to be for everyone going through something like this.
help will come but how will they know where to look if your not calling for them?

Thanks :iconfanartfangirl: for grammar-checking!

Edit* oh my gosh! 3,000 views and 130 favs?! THANK YOU!

Edit** Thanks so, so, SO, much! I can not believe that this got so many vies/favs!
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:iconbecka1099:
becka1099 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
Sweet not cute.
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becka1099 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
Ahhh! That's so cute! The one below.
Only Ed would bust down a door like that.
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Ryame-Yuki Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Ryame-Yuki Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwwwww this is great! good job!
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ZombieDswim Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015
fma gif  ed 
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:iconash1102:
Ash1102 Featured By Owner May 23, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
💘 it! 
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20mathisbr Featured By Owner May 11, 2015
Wow Ed is really protective I wonder if he kicked down the door with his metal leg because somehow I don't think he could do it without the meatal leg.
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Fanfictions112 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
No, otherwise he would bust through the window ninja style.
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Discardia2 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2015  New Deviant
True dat
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realswobby Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist
Wow... it was really nice!:')
My mom isn't perfect, too, but not as bad as here ^^. But Ed's kiss always rulez! ^///^

...One mistake I saw: "too" rather than "to" in some moments.

But anyway - good job!
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EdxwinMoments Featured By Owner Edited Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I will read it later I promise I just loved the pic lol
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2015  Student General Artist
Aw! But I wanted to kick down the door!




But I loved it!
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LondonKirkland101 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Student Artist
U better arrest her
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OtakuAnimeLuv123 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015
"It’s a good thing you have someone like Ed who will break into your own house then arrest your mother… "

LAWL Lolz does that not seem funny or ironic to anyone else?
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Luminescence456 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That was awesome....OMG Ed just kicked down the door!! XD it seems just like him, though... I LOVED IT
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animecrush7 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
When I read "Instead of opening the door, like any normal person would, Ed kicked it down." Im like obviously he is not a normal person cuz he is amazing like that. 
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AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Brutalight-Sparcake Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015
Chain letters... Shocking!!! Fake things that scare people! I'll have baD luck? But baD isn't a word lol XD
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AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
 lol sorry its hard to type if your 3/4 blind
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Vamp104 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lol RO do you always do stuff like this?
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:iconangeltheforgottenro:
AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
not rilly but I gave it a shot and nothing happened* shighs hevilly*
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:iconvamp104:
Vamp104 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lol same
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:iconangeltheforgottenro:
AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconvamp104:
Vamp104 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
^^ 
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:iconangeltheforgottenro:
AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
* glomps u*
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:iconvamp104:
Vamp104 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*noogies you* 
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you ed *hugging him* thank you
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:iconbanettelover13:
BanetteLover13 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014
Thank you, Ed. 
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juvialovesgray Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm crying.. 
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RyuzakiSusanuma Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
take that knob gobbler
ed my herooo Frozen - Elsa Crying Icon 
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Chaotic-Kitten2001 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Yep seems like Ed kicking down the door
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just realized that I had already read this once and put a comment on it...! Lol I love it! All over again! Lol
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol:) I like how he kicked the door down...! Lol
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miny-mina Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
yay!!! now i really need someone like ed to really take care of MY mom....i mean what
ehehehehe,this was great i loved it ^^'
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Envylover565 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
<3
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:la: ermergerd (but what really happened to my mother is that she died 3 years after she took me through the gate of truth. more story to come when im ready to write it!)
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You and your mother went through the portal of truth?!?!? How sad. (I know it's your oc so don't weary)
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. She's supposed to have to died because she had too much corruption around her heart when she passed through (the black stuff the gate leaves behind) but I survived because her love was powerful enough to keep it off me, but not enough for her, so it slowly spread until she died in her sleep. I will write the whole story when I have time.
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok Edward Elric (I got this) [V1]  I'll be waiting for the day to come!!!
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MidnaPlayer Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Kyuuuu dat Edward tho Bunny Emoji-42 (Awww) [V2] 
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Kiritolover101 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
Oh yah it's a'good' thing you have someone like Ed to break into your own house then arrest your mother! Lolz I laughed so hard!
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FemPortugal Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my reaction throughout this whole story in order:    STITCH LLORA Scared and running Neko Emoji-28 (Yay sho happy) [V2] Frozen - HUG! Hold me... I'm scared. Love Lily Thank you 
then at the last sentence:   England (Laughing) [V3] Romano (Mustache Laughs) [V1] Tomoya Okazaki (Laughing Hard) [V1] laughing Paulie Hatsune Miku-04 (Laughs) Lily laughing hard Mirai Kuriyama (Laughs) [V2] Tomochika Shibuya (Laughing) [V2] Shinka Nibutani (Laughs) [V1] Chili Anime Emoji (Ohohoho Laugh) [V3] Hip Hip Hurray - NaNoEmo Day 15 Waving the lol flag Annie Leonhart (Laughing)  [V1] Momo Kisaragi (Laughs) [V7] FOX LAUGH 2011 Icon Free England Laugh Taeyeon (SNSD) 

my parents thought I was having a seizure because it got so bad I wasn't making any sound.    
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narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
how  did  appear  when  I  was  looking  up  light  yagami  fanfiction?? :baffled: Llama Emoji-38 (Confused) [V2] 
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writtenwordoflove Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014
It's telling you this is the story you should be reading

I use the same tags for all my stories, and since I have a light x reader series that might be why :P
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narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
lol  ok 
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IbofTheRedRose Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014
Ed!!!! Kickin down mah door!!!!! Should I be mad? Cuz I'm just fangirling cuz he did that. :3
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Melody8888 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That's Ed for you indeed X3
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InvaderWitchKazu Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Damn right I got me Ed
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SelmaMert Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Clannad Dango (Love) [V1] Clannad Dango (Love) [V1] 
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ita-chan-the-awesome Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Student Artist
Edward loves himself? Really that's not nice. Why can't he love me? T^T
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